The protagonist is narrating her story, which she is also typing up at the very beginning. This works, but then again, it doesn’t. The dialogue is really just a big block of prose. On the one hand, this suits the theme and style. It’s a fairytale. Stuff like that gets said in fairytales. On the other hand, some of the clumsy repetitive wording can be irritating and feel like a bit of a space filler. But then again, there is a rhythm and an element to fun to it and I think this would appeal very well to children.
Another element that kids would warm to are the close up shots in the introduction. They have an intimate quality and invites the audience in. What the moral of the story is or what it’s trying to say, I’m not sure. You can get used to anything if you put up with it long enough? There’s nothing wrong with having a middle aged man poke you in your bedroom every night? There could have been the potential for a lot more hilarity with this. Her at work, on a date, or better. As it stands, there is a ton of setup with a conclusive ending but not much in the middle of it.
There are some nicely composed shots and good camera movement whenever possible. The soundtrack is mellow and unobtrusive to the narration. The budget looks fairly low but good enough to complete a fairly standard production. Performances are a bit cartoonish but this fits in well with the story and as mentioned, probably fine for the kids.
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